I am sharing with you, some tips for describing fear in creative writing;
- Use sensory details: Describe the sensory details,
- Hearing
- Hearing causing fear
- Listening voices of others full of fear
- Sight
- Sceneries causing fear
- Sceneries showing fear
- Taste
- Taste of fear
- Smell
- Adrenaline-like chemicals may be released in the body during times of fear and could potentially produce an odor
- touch
- feels
- Hearing
- Consider the character’s personality: Describe the way a character is experiencing the fear;
- a character who is more anxious might show fear more openly.
- a character who is typically brave might try to hide their fear
- Using figurative language:
- similes
- metaphors
- Using the dialogue: Describe the dialogue and it can help make a scary scene come to life and show the reader how the character is feeling.
- Showing is better than telling: Instead of telling the reader that a character is scared, describe the physical signs of fear, such as a racing heart, trembling hands, or widened pupils.
Examples of describing fear in writing
- “Her pulse raced as she struggled to control her quivering palms, her eyes wide with panic.”
- “He stood still, his pupils dilated and his respiration shallow, trying to settle himself.”
- “Her knuckles became white as she grasped the table edge to calm her rushing heart.”
- “A cold, tight knot formed in his gut as he recognized the risk.”
- She couldn’t breathe because her dread felt like a vice hold on her chest.
- “He ran with leaden legs, immobilised by terror.”
- “She panicked and felt suffocated.”
- “He was trembling, his dread clouding his thinking.”
- “She closed her eyes to filter out the anxiety threatening to overtake her.”
- He felt nauseous from terror.
- “Her hands were trembling so badly she couldn’t grasp onto anything, her terror making it impossible to focus.”
- “He felt like his heart was about to explode out of his chest, his terror making it impossible to breathe.”
- “Her worry caused a chilly perspiration on her forehead.”
- “His gut churned with anxiety.”
- “She was shivering, afraid she might break.”
- “He felt nauseous, his anxiety making it impossible to think properly.” “She felt a flood of worry rush over her, her fear making her feel imprisoned.”
- “He ran with jelly legs, immobilised with terror.”
- “Fear suffocated her, making it impossible to breathe.”
- His worry made it hard to be calm.
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